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I remember the first time I ever saw Chase. It was in a picture. His head was turned sharply to the right as if to avoid the camera lens. He was beautiful with his dark brown hair and green eyes. My heart raced just by looking at him. We met through a mutual friend and were immediately drawn to each other. And so our story begins...
I was fourteen and he was fifteen. We both lived in Las Vegas at the time, but went to separate high schools across town from each other. And when I say...

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