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myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (2474)   ranked 16 out of 231 in poems5 months ago

The Rear view Mirror has been shattered and broken
Without any hope these words unspoken
The Truth through the lies, the tear stains in the skies
Our Lives once entwined, do come unwind.

Friends Forever now shout Never
Blood Sisters Now Become Blisters
A Burn From The Sun A Slap To The Back
Now Makes Your Stories Seem Whack

 
 
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elitess (982) response was accepted on 8/6/2008.
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tags:  poem, friends, broken friendship
 
1. myLot reputation of 89/100. elitess (982)   ranked 74 out of 231 in poems   5 months ago

This is such a nice poem, but i do hope that it's not inspired by a bad incident with your friends - take care!


myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (2474)   ranked 16 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Well it is. Sadly my friend's aren't being friends. The whole sun burn thing? It's kind of inspired by what I think my friend had done the day she was supposed to hang with me and my fiance... go swimming and get burnt...

Thanks for your response.


myLot reputation of 96/100. hellcowboy (3105)   ranked 162 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Yeah it is kind of sad the way your friends are acting, and they defitnally aint being friends,but that is a really good poem,and and atleast you can say they have inspired you to write,and that they have helped us make a little money because you posted your poem on here.


myLot reputation of 89/100. elitess (982)   ranked 74 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Bravo hellcowboy, i like that you are seeing the positive side of this situation!

Sorry about the behavior of your friends.

Take care both


myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (2474)   ranked 16 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Thank you very much for your response.


myLot reputation of 96/100. hellcowboy (3105)   ranked 162 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Thanks I do always try to see the positive in a situation because it makes life easier,and thanks for you sympathy on how stupid her friends are being,and have a good day my friend,take care,and Happy Posting.

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2. myLot reputation of 77/100. sissi320 (187)   ranked 212 out of 231 in poems   5 months ago

It is a good poem, but it seems a little sad.
Be sunshine!


myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (2474)   ranked 16 out of 231 in poems  5 months ago

Thank you very much. This is a sad poem and I wrote it when I was said. My friends had just insulted me and it seems we are drifting apart from one another. I am happy knowing that what will happen between myself and my friends are now in the clear.

Again thanks for your response to me!

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