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ShawnTG (16)   ranked 3,363 out of 5,125 in writing7 months ago

I've Started a story in which I will Update each 3--7 days, as the story, progress, its a Fnatsy, Mystery, thriller, named The Life Star, visit

www.mystorycentral.blogspot.com

Leave a comment tell me what you think.

 
 
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1. myLot reputation of 96/100. skydancer (1199)   ranked 1,161 out of 5,125 in writing   7 months ago

That's a great idea to keep it in a blog to update periodically like that. And your writing seems very strong and descriptive too. Keep up the great work! You can only get better!

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2. myLot reputation of 98/100. re08dz (862)   ranked 332 out of 5,125 in writing   7 months ago

Hi, I've only just started to read this (I'll bookmark it and come back to it later) but I wanted to offer a quick suggestion if you don't mind.

While setting it up on a blog is a great idea - because of the template etc that you're using the written text only covers a small area - when people are reading on a computer large chunks of text can be really hard on the eyes - so as well as putting a line break between paragraphs you might want to look at breaking it up a little more - say a line space between dialogue etc.

I'll try to read it properly later on today.


ShawnTG (16)   ranked 3,363 out of 5,125 in writing  7 months ago

Hey Thanks For the tip will edit and up date is shortly!

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3. myLot reputation of 92/100. anaknitatay (725)   ranked 650 out of 5,125 in writing   7 months ago

Hi, I also planned a blog similar to this one but never got around to it because I was so busy.

It's nice to see I'm not the only one with this idea. I'll be sure to check out your blog and contact you once I've started mine. thumbup

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